Sunday, September 12, 2010

Comment Evaluation

Please read the 1st posts written on our blog.  Without mentioning anyone specific, comment on what you think we can do to improve our posts.











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16 comments:

  1. I think we should paste it on word so we can use spell check. Because if we talk about spelling and gramer and dont use it ourselvs then we act like total hypocrits

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  2. I think we should make our posts longer and more detailed. We also should work on the conventonal skills.

    Jacob H.

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  3. I noticed quite a few spelling errors like under case I's, and lack of punctuation. This may seem like a repeat, but really, just use Microsoft Word.

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  4. I think our posts should definitely be longer, more specific and be more detailed, I think we should just try to put a little more effort into our posts.
    -Jake

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  5. I think we could use a little bit better sense of wording in posting our blogs.


    -Col

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  6. I think that in our posts that we need to check our spelling. I also think that everybody has a great idea of what they would like to learn this year. I think that we need to type slowly so that we can create a awesome post!

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  7. I think that an intelligent post would require adequate spelling and grammar, as well as correct facts and respectful opinions. I also believe that it should be a decent size, though I suppose that doesn’t really matter, as this post is still pretty small…

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  8. I think that everyone has a good idea of what they want to learn. Most people want to learn more about technology and our government. One thing we could have done better is to explain specifically what we want to learn about. What technology do you want to learn? What part of Government do you want to explore? Those are just little things that I thought could be a little better. We are doing well for first time bloggers.

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  9. I think that people could type longer blogs! People should take more time to think about what they are posting and not just put out the first things that come to their mind. Not that I saw too much, but people could check to make sure that they didn't spell words incorrectly.

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  10. I thibk that our posts should be longer because two sentences aren't going to do it. Also, people should be more careful with their punctuation. People should actaully put some thought into what they're posting as well, not just posting the first thing they think of.

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  11. I think we should make our posts longer and more detailed. We also should work on the conventional skills.

    Jacob H.

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  12. I saw a lot of people typing I's as "i", and quite a few misspellings on just about every post. It would be pretty easy to fix these problems, just copy and paste it into MS Word and use spell-check. Then we would have perfectly spelled posts.

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  13. Make the posts more interesting use more emotion, but stay serious at the same time. Make your post sound professional, but not like you are a know it all. We could add pictures if we are allowed.

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  14. We should make the posts longer and more interesting, because a lot of them were boring and short. Many of the posts had a lot of spelling errors. When we answered the questions, many of the posts did not explain their answers.

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  15. We should have very detailed work with good punctuation and have nice long and laid back posts.

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  16. We should have correct grammar, spelling, and punctuation. It should be relatively long. Although this one is not.

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